How to show action affecting an unconscious POV character

If you’ve been following our newswire for any length of time, you’ve become aware of the perils of “head-hopping.”

That’s always easier said than done — especially when your point-of-view character becomes unconscious.

Obviously, you’ll have to reveal what happens, but not through their eyes.

Editor Louise Harnby, helpfully, has five strategies to show action affecting your unconscious POV character without head-hopping.

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